整句話可以改成: i pushed the door and found my grandfather lying on the ground,就在這時醫(yī)生來了,中考英語寫作精彩點(diǎn)評與修改(二), he already lose his consciousness. (1. 時態(tài)錯誤push 應(yīng)該用pushed. 2.用詞不當(dāng)discover 表示”發(fā)現(xiàn)了存在了很久的東西”,失去了知覺,3.語法錯誤:時態(tài)前后不一致, only my grandfather and i being at home. (最