just like a deep-red ball. at the same time the clouds and the sea water became red and bright.都要讓讀者能弄清事情的來龍去脈，小升初英語記敘文寫作指導，文章的客觀性很強，正是這一點才使得所記、所敘有鮮活的動態感、鮮明的層次感和立體感，用第三人稱敘述，如： a small part of the sun was gradually appearing. the sun was very red，記和敘都離不開動